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Mahdi Meshkatee's avatar

There is such palpable absence here, Kotare.

David Kirkby's avatar

A very beautiful evocation of love and closeness, friend Kōtare...

Best wishes

Dave :)

kōtare's avatar

Thanks Dave, that’s really kind.

David Kirkby's avatar

Sincerely meant, my friend. I rarely read a poem about this which feels like my own experience of love. You achieve it with elegant simplicity...

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School of Blue's avatar

Stunning.

kōtare's avatar

Thanks Richard, I liked the way this one turned out, editors called me lofty. 🤷‍♀️