Originally published in Scuzzbucket
There is such palpable absence here, Kotare.
A very beautiful evocation of love and closeness, friend Kōtare...
Best wishes
Dave :)
Thanks Dave, that’s really kind.
Sincerely meant, my friend. I rarely read a poem about this which feels like my own experience of love. You achieve it with elegant simplicity...
D
🙏
Stunning.
Thanks Richard, I liked the way this one turned out, editors called me lofty. 🤷♀️
There is such palpable absence here, Kotare.
A very beautiful evocation of love and closeness, friend Kōtare...
Best wishes
Dave :)
Thanks Dave, that’s really kind.
Sincerely meant, my friend. I rarely read a poem about this which feels like my own experience of love. You achieve it with elegant simplicity...
D
🙏
Stunning.
Thanks Richard, I liked the way this one turned out, editors called me lofty. 🤷♀️